Saturday, June 25, 2011

Remember me?



Lo and         behold,
am out there alone battling the cold,
fighting it am lying on the ground curled,
the memories in my head; they just swirl,
talks and promises out of the window you hurled,
killing me every moment; a new pain unfurled,
its all still here; but you are seen nowhere near,
the message, the letter, your scent on my sweater,
crying myself to sleep; an attempt to feel better,
my heart betrays me; to you it is so loyal,
still holds you as a princess whose is royal,
desperate to loosen on me your hold,
just wishing I could be like you so bold,
I was your silver, I was gold,
Remember me??
I was once your
World!


F.Y.I - The poem is written roughly in the shape of a heart. ( In-case you just failed to notice.)

9 comments:

Sanjana said...

Simply superb :)
I mean how could anyone write a heart shaped poem ?? daz extraordinary... and the poem is amazing.. :)

Achuthan Raman Chari said...

@sanjana ty..
random thought and a challenge. Accomplished in da end ;)

Dishilicious said...

wow! i love this. i really do feel this. and nice work with the heart. :)

lunawitch15 said...

you did such a wonderful job on this poem, that no words can describe. awesome


http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/2011/07/30/she/

the feeling lioness said...

well this is kinda fine and alright

abthomas said...

Extremely cool write and presentation

Kay said...

No, I didn't fail to notice. I love your use of green @ the last word. A brilliant write! Thank you!

Marbles in My Pocket said...

Gripping imagery in this. The last line is a slam dunk game winner!

Jingle said...

a heart shape, with creative passion and thoughts.

well done,

Happy Potluck!